I remember the first day i saw you,
A smile as dark as the dusk with a vibrancy rivaling that of the morning dew,
I saw you in a strange contrast to my dark emptiness.
I did not think how much of you would be changed in me since when you were pointed out to me.
clueless as I am, as I ever am, I noticed you.
Sweet dear, if e’er time allows us,
Forgive me for taking too long..
Hey, nice poem. Very deep.
Did the writer in this poem do something wrong to their lover?
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something like that, everything was set for an interesting love story but the writer wouldn’t commit
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Well that’s too bad. Love is a beautiful thing. I believe if you find someone that truly cares for you, you should fight for them.
In any case, I think the writer in the poem should fight for their lover, tell them how they truly feel, it’s never too late to tell someone you want them in your life.
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Well that’s too bad, I believe in love and I think that if the writer still truly loves their significant other, they should fight for them. It’s never too late to tell someone you want them in your life.
Anyway, just the rumbling of another writer
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thank you
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